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New Iray Album Art I created, need feedback

Kode of BlissKode of Bliss Posts: 36
edited September 2016 in Art Studio

Been working on a new album cover for my latest Album. I reader it in DAZ using IRay, all assets are from DAZ store except the Letters.

http://i.imgur.com/Lyq9Rx3.jpg

 

What do you think, any impovements?

Thanks,

Kelly 

Post edited by Chohole on

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  • Kode of BlissKode of Bliss Posts: 36
    edited September 2016

    New render better or worse?

    http://i.imgur.com/e17C2Pa.jpg

     

     

    Post edited by Chohole on
  • LinwellyLinwelly Posts: 5,947

    Second is definitley better as the letters are mor part of the image. But I would advice to use the same brickshader and the same orientation on both letters (probably have the alter the tiling for the small letter inside to achive the same scale in the render.

  • SaphirewildSaphirewild Posts: 6,668

    I do agree with Linwelly about the lettering, but I would like to add someting to the advice, your creature in the background is hardly visible to me. I think you need to put maybe a kinda background around the creature to make it pop out to people, like maybe a whiteish haze or a glow.

  • NovicaNovica Posts: 23,887

    Hi Kode of Bliss! Happy to see your thread in Art Studio. Okay, being honest, here I go:

    The two glowing orbs in the background- what are they? 

    Second, you have the fushia glow, but if the purple letter on our right is only slightly dimmer, it would also be throwing a glow onto the arm. While I like the dramatic light on the face, I have to agree you've lost too much detail of the body. Those arms in particular.

    Honestly, the white moon (I assume a moon) doesn't add anything IMO, as it's too white. A different color (like a Harvest Moon, but not so orange) or even a bluer one may help. I think it distracts because of the size. I'm not as focused on that aspect as I am the lighting on the figure. Quite a nice concept you have!  yes

  • Kode of BlissKode of Bliss Posts: 36
    edited September 2016

    How about this version.

    Post edited by Chohole on
  • Kode of BlissKode of Bliss Posts: 36
    Novica said:

    Hi Kode of Bliss! Happy to see your thread in Art Studio. Okay, being honest, here I go:

    The two glowing orbs in the background- what are they? 

    Second, you have the fushia glow, but if the purple letter on our right is only slightly dimmer, it would also be throwing a glow onto the arm. While I like the dramatic light on the face, I have to agree you've lost too much detail of the body. Those arms in particular.

    Honestly, the white moon (I assume a moon) doesn't add anything IMO, as it's too white. A different color (like a Harvest Moon, but not so orange) or even a bluer one may help. I think it distracts because of the size. I'm not as focused on that aspect as I am the lighting on the figure. Quite a nice concept you have!  yes

    I like the idea of a redder or non white moon. I will fix that for the next version. Thanks for the suggestion.

     

  • NovicaNovica Posts: 23,887

    Looking much better IMO. I can tell what the creatures are now, and the smaller moon looks good to me. Coming along nicely! 

  • Kode of BlissKode of Bliss Posts: 36
    edited September 2016

    Well I think this might be the final version, did a lot more post work as well. Let me know what you think 

    Thanks for all the feedback

    Post edited by Chohole on
  • SzarkSzark Posts: 10,634

    now that pops for me

  • SaphirewildSaphirewild Posts: 6,668

    The last one is really a WOW affect for me IMO!!!

    Love the changes you made to the last one.

  • NovicaNovica Posts: 23,887

    Yep! And the moon and creatures go alot better together in the scene. Nicely done!

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