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paulchristeypaulchristey Posts: 6
in Art Studio

Hi I’m fairly new on here so I only have 10 images in my gallery at the moment. I made my first image at the start of the year 2018 using DazStudio with purchased assets. I’ve brought a tone of assets & figures already (mainly Gen8 female), its quite addictive!  I’m looking for ways to improve my 3d art images ( I’m not getting great feedback from my wife lol). Please can you let me know your constructive thoughts. I’ve seen some great work on here from a range of talent. thanks for you time :)

https://www.daz3d.com/gallery/users/2738051

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  • IceDragonArtIceDragonArt Posts: 12,548

    Welcome to the Art Studio!  From the looks of your gallery I'm not sure you need much help! 

    You can post your images here in your thread to get constructive criticism on them, or just to show them off lol.  Its a lot easier for us to look at, and then comment when they are all in the same thread. 

    Looking forward to seeing what else you do!

    And yes, yes it is, very addictive lol.

  • agent unawaresagent unawares Posts: 3,513
    paulchristey said:

    ( I’m not getting great feedback from my wife lol). Please can you let me know your constructive thoughts.

    Make some hot men and maybe she gives better feedback. wink

    Your gallery is excellent, especially this one, very believable.

  • ChadCryptoChadCrypto Posts: 596
    agent unawares said:
    paulchristey said:

    ( I’m not getting great feedback from my wife lol). Please can you let me know your constructive thoughts.

    Make some hot men and maybe she gives better feedback. wink

    Your gallery is excellent, especially this one, very believable.

    Good work! You really got the skin work down. How did you get such a good wet look?

  • paulchristeypaulchristey Posts: 6
    ChadCrypto said:
    agent unawares said:
     

    Good work! You really got the skin work down. How did you get such a good wet look?

    Thanks ChadCrypto I used the geo shell from wet & dry baby doll outfit  https://www.daz3d.com/dforce-hd-wet-and-dry-baby-doll-outfit-for-genesis-8-female-s

  • RainRain Posts: 335
    paulchristey said:

    Hi I’m fairly new on here so I only have 10 images in my gallery at the moment. I made my first image at the start of the year 2018 using DazStudio with purchased assets. I’ve brought a tone of assets & figures already (mainly Gen8 female), its quite addictive!  I’m looking for ways to improve my 3d art images ( I’m not getting great feedback from my wife lol). Please can you let me know your constructive thoughts. I’ve seen some great work on here from a range of talent. thanks for you time :)

    https://www.daz3d.com/gallery/users/2738051

    image

    I have absolutely no constructive thoughts except to say...Wow!  Keep up the good work.  

  • ChadCryptoChadCrypto Posts: 596
    paulchristey said:
    ChadCrypto said:
    agent unawares said:
     

    Good work! You really got the skin work down. How did you get such a good wet look?

    Thanks ChadCrypto I used the geo shell from wet & dry baby doll outfit  https://www.daz3d.com/dforce-hd-wet-and-dry-baby-doll-outfit-for-genesis-8-female-s

    Thanks for the link. I remember when that came out. Wish i would have gotten it back then. Hope a sale comes soon  

    I Look forward to more of your work.

     

  • SaphirewildSaphirewild Posts: 6,668

    @paulchristey Welcome to the Art Forum!!

    You seem to already have a firm grasp on Daz Studio for sure.

    I have nothing to critique at all some very stunning works indeed!!

  • themidgetthemidget Posts: 287

    Love your work - you are really good.  One point of improvement would be, where you have the figure within a landscape, it usually looks better if the figure isn't in the middle.  On your top image for example, you could try moving the figure to the right so that she is looking into the scene.  If there is a plain background however, the figure can be perfectly at home in the middle as in the beautiful tatooed figure above.  Try it - if you don't like it, just ignore me!wink

  • DiomedeDiomede Posts: 15,169
    spuffy said:
    paulchristey said:

    Hi I’m fairly new on here so I only have 10 images in my gallery at the moment. I made my first image at the start of the year 2018 using DazStudio with purchased assets. I’ve brought a tone of assets & figures already (mainly Gen8 female), its quite addictive!  I’m looking for ways to improve my 3d art images ( I’m not getting great feedback from my wife lol). Please can you let me know your constructive thoughts. I’ve seen some great work on here from a range of talent. thanks for you time :)

    https://www.daz3d.com/gallery/users/2738051

    image

    I have absolutely no constructive thoughts except to say...Wow!  Keep up the good work.  

    +1

     

  • WandererWanderer Posts: 957
    edited April 2018

    Okay, I'm a noob, but even I know amazing work when I see it. Your gallery is stunning. You keep doing that and not only will you get picked up for promos on the main page, but you'll also be offered opportunities to do promo work for PA's who like the extra help. Also, as a new user, you're welcome to join us on the new user challenges to help you learn your way around Daz, but I don't really think you need it. Each month the focus is on some particular aspect like composition (which you don't appear to need), lighting (again, which  you don't appear to need), posing (ditto), and this month is an open render challenge. But, I still want to try to make you feel welcome in the community by inviting you to join us if you think any of the monthly challenges would help you grow as an artist. Honestly, though, you appear to be so far beyond this.

    Post edited by Wanderer on
  • ChadCryptoChadCrypto Posts: 596
    edited April 2018
    paulchristey said:
    ChadCrypto said:
    agent unawares said:
     

    Good work! You really got the skin work down. How did you get such a good wet look?

    Thanks ChadCrypto I used the geo shell from wet & dry baby doll outfit  https://www.daz3d.com/dforce-hd-wet-and-dry-baby-doll-outfit-for-genesis-8-female-s

    @paulchristey   I just got this!  Holy Smokes, it's 3 gigs. Wow.  This is one hell of a product!   thanks again for using this in such a awesome way. cool

    Post edited by ChadCrypto on
  • paulchristeypaulchristey Posts: 6
    themidget said:

    Love your work - you are really good.  One point of improvement would be, where you have the figure within a landscape, it usually looks better if the figure isn't in the middle.  On your top image for example, you could try moving the figure to the right so that she is looking into the scene.  If there is a plain background however, the figure can be perfectly at home in the middle as in the beautiful tatooed figure above.  Try it - if you don't like it, just ignore me!wink

    Thanks themidget (i wont ask why your called that), Its great getting some constuctive feedback :) the background for this particular image (the end of hope) was way too distracting with the large bright explosion in the city. I really wanted to try and get the attention to focused on the emotion of the character. cheers mate, thanks so much.  

  • paulchristeypaulchristey Posts: 6
    Wanderer said:

    Okay, I'm a noob, but even I know amazing work when I see it. Your gallery is stunning. You keep doing that and not only will you get picked up for promos on the main page, but you'll also be offered opportunities to do promo work for PA's who like the extra help. Also, as a new user, you're welcome to join us on the new user challenges to help you learn your way around Daz, but I don't really think you need it. Each month the focus is on some particular aspect like composition (which you don't appear to need), lighting (again, which  you don't appear to need), posing (ditto), and this month is an open render challenge. But, I still want to try to make you feel welcome in the community by inviting you to join us if you think any of the monthly challenges would help you grow as an artist. Honestly, though, you appear to be so far beyond this.

    Hey Wanderer, thank you for the positive feedback! sounds like I might be on the right track then :) The new user challenges sounds like a plan to explore! and it would be great to get picked up for promos on the main page! here's hoping lol

    Cheers mate

     

  • themidgetthemidget Posts: 287
    paulchristey said:
    themidget said:

    Love your work - you are really good.  One point of improvement would be, where you have the figure within a landscape, it usually looks better if the figure isn't in the middle.  On your top image for example, you could try moving the figure to the right so that she is looking into the scene.  If there is a plain background however, the figure can be perfectly at home in the middle as in the beautiful tatooed figure above.  Try it - if you don't like it, just ignore me!wink

    Thanks themidget (i wont ask why your called that), Its great getting some constuctive feedback :) the background for this particular image (the end of hope) was way too distracting with the large bright explosion in the city. I really wanted to try and get the attention to focused on the emotion of the character. cheers mate, thanks so much.  

    You are welcome.  Actually,I'm not short at all.  The midget is a character in the trilogy "Illuminatus" by Robert Shea and Robert Anton Wilson.  He's a kind of fun anarchist who puts notices up everywhere that look official but are really absurd.

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