My First work. How i can improve?

nikijunpei81

Hi,  this is my first good rendering in Daz. What do you think? I like it, but i don't know if it is good or not. I did a mess with the light? It is a simple work, i know, but i will reallly appreciate every comment which help me to grown with thi software. Thank you.

 

margrave

It's pretty good.

Some points:

• Try and fix that ugly split in the hair.
• Turn off Rendering Quality and increase the Max Samples/Max Time to get rid of the noise.
• Use a point light to brighten up the back corner.

Hylas

I agree with magrave that the hair is not posed great and there is still a lot of noise in the render.

The lighting doesn't bother me, I think it's perfectly fine. You could experiment to get a more dramatic or moody effect, but I think it's fine as it is.

I would probably add DOF.

 

I think the composition could be more interesting.

Right now the eye doesn't really know where to go.

Usually the face tends to draw attention but her face is blurry in this render, so it doesn't serve as a focal point.

Which leaves her body as the focal point; but it's not posed in a particularly interesting way, or seen from a particularly interesting angle.

 

To be clear, I think it's a decent render, especially for a beginner!

These are just some subjective opinions you can consider.

nikijunpei81

Thank you. I will try to improve following your advice.