character art help

jordanbrancato

hello, in the files below on the left is my current work in process and on the right is the master piece im trying to figure out. Ive figured out her base model and hair but keep falling short to as how her face is done. if anyone has any ideas or suggestions on how to make my character more like the one on the right please let me know..

 

 

thx you for your suggestions. 

Hylas

Looks like the same face to me. Use warmer light?