New portrait render

WayouteastWayouteast Posts: 2
edited December 1969 in Art Studio

Just finished a portrait of a character from a story I've been working on for some time. I wanted it to look like a slightly posed 'formal' portrait that the character might have commissioned for a loved one. I'm going to start working on a similar portrait of her male partner soon... like a matching pair.

Any comments and suggestions for improvements appreciated.

This is Victoria 4 (I know... old school! :) ) rendered in Poser 9 with postwork done in Photoshop.

Jon

Membra_portrait_2.jpg
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Comments

  • Serene NightSerene Night Posts: 17,651
    edited December 1969

    I like it a lot. I can't tell she is v4 she looks great. I'm torn between suggesting a change of color for the background picture and liking the way it fades into the existing same color background.

  • WayouteastWayouteast Posts: 2
    edited December 1969

    Thank you for the reply! You could well be right about the background... I tried a couple of 'warmer' colours as well as this one but they seemed to 'wash out' the quite cool and muted skin tones so I went with the more neutral one. I wonder if it might help if I was to alter the lighting slightly to bring the lighter areas of the background further to (our) left so that there was a lighter tone behind her dark hair... Thank you for the comment!

  • Serene NightSerene Night Posts: 17,651
    edited December 1969

    Maybe a deep and dark mauve or burgundy? Something to contrast with her beautiful hair.

  • WayouteastWayouteast Posts: 2
    edited December 1969

    Hmmm. How about this...?

    Membra_portrait_burgundy.jpg
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  • Tramp GraphicsTramp Graphics Posts: 2,411
    edited December 1969

    Hmmm. How about this...?
    Perfect.
  • Serene NightSerene Night Posts: 17,651
    edited December 1969

    The only thing I could suggest would be to lighten the values of red a bit so that it contrasts with the hairline like the original picture does.

    =-)

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