American football girls animated in my music video

Martin Kenz

Hey guys, after 4 months learning Daz Studio I finally managed to make my first animated musicvideo.

I appreciate all tips and tricks on how to make things look better.

Please check it out on my youtube channel: www.youtube.com/c/martinkenz (The song name is "Touch Down")

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IceDragonArt

That's pretty darn good

Martin Kenz

Ice Dragon Art said:

That's pretty darn good

Thanks a lot!!

Serene Night

My only feedback is that I think the faces of the girls could use some definite expressions. Maybe because they are moving around dancing but I can't see their facial exprssion as well as I'd like and when other characters are in the scene it might be interesting for the characters to make eye contact with eachother drawing the viewer into the scene a bit more.